All Comments on 'The inverted logic of trees'

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BlueskyBeautyBlueskyBeautyalmost 20 years ago
i really liked this..

some would say a metaphor overused maybe, but dang you painted images so well..ending with winters silent chill.

i really thought this was wonderful.

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
love the title

and it's a very good poem. I'm not sure about naked black fingers and naked black limbs. Though, you are saying that naked black limbs surrender again, which ties in with the first stanza, so I suppose using naked black twice works.

*No longer using the thermometer.

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