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postobitumpostobitumover 19 years ago
Awww

I feel bad that he won't get to read anymore poetry! Nice job, Art, I really liked the ending, the siren.

sacksackover 19 years ago
neat little poem....

especially liked the last two lines. Good presentation, spelling, and structure!

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