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All Comments on 'The Last Time'

by esotericmasque

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erectus123erectus123over 10 years ago
well

done, last three words might be eliminated but nicely descriptive and erotic

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
I could feel his thumbs against my ass cheeks : hands gripped my hips large , wide & firm:

Blushin' a bit , i felt it ........ Nice lines in ur prose poetry !

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
glad I had time to pop over

and look at the new poems, some nice work here,

sexy, I like the way you portrayed the scene here. agree with Erectus, ;last three words detract from the piece

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