All Comments on 'The Life I live'

I'm not surprised this hasn't had much attention.

Non-erotic poetry is the least viewed of all Lit's categories and there is a lot of it on the site.

It works as a poem yet is depressing because it is so true for many people.

Perhaps if you gave it an unusual title it might attract more attention?

She says that any mother would recognize and understand this poem instantly.

Keep up the great work!

Alas, the life many of us live.