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All Comments on 'The Little Ballerina'

by dirtyjoe69

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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
THE HOURS SPENT

learning a trade-off. TK U MLJ LV NV

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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A light little joyous piece.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
The dance.

An unusually exquisite experience ~ watching a young girl struggling to do her first dance steps. A thing of beauty ~ the memory a joy forever. Loved the illustration.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
The rhyming is nice

and the imagery evokes every young girl as she climbs out of her cocoon into the possibilities of being a woman.

Well done!

Regards, DJ

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