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by charles swann

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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Seeing this ...

I can see this taking place.

Just a lil spot on the horizon

of where, you wanna take us.

I like the imagery of anticipation.

Leaves me ... anticipating. Of course ~ *Smiles*

ya tease ~ lol.

Welcome to Lit. my friend.

Can not wait to see where this leads ~

Awaiting more ~

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
RF..

I agree...much images here very simple yet, painted in color...bluerains

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Well done ~

leaving thirsting for more...

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