All Comments on 'The Mirror Unbroken'

I can hear this read at a poetry slam.

I liked the images in the first stanza the most, how mirrors are changed into prisms, turning reflection into the spectrum of color. I would like to see more of a story, a transfer of meaning from these images. I really did enjoy reading this piece--

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With Maria 2394...poetry should be a thought or emotion summed up...I don't feel that here at all.

As a rule, I do not like to post negative public comments but when you are mentioned on the New Poems Review and Man Ray's "Repossession" was overlooked, I figured this must be something terrific.

Sadly, I do not find it so.

a great deal of time went into the rhyme scheme in this poem. I found it, at times, to be more of a tounge twister. This took away from the rest of the poem.

sometimes things can be overdone and I believe that is the case with this one. Still good work, though

maria

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