All Comments on 'The Non-Making of a Mama'

This was a really cute poem. Was it true?

There you go sweetums, run to you salvation in reading the stories on Lit!

A woman wouldn't have any trouble picking up men after spending so much time on lit. Then again, maybe those bikers should come here and get a few pointers on how to be seduced. LOL!

so the woman at LIT were turned down by bikers, damn now you tell me, <chuckleboned> I know just kiddin', funny though, and kinda clever, I almost thought it was gonna be a joke told but it truely does fit in the poems catagory <grin> The way it all wove to a cute ending, nice poem.

prose. You are the king. I enjoyed this a great deal. Very in the spirit of my favorite site. Good write!

~Syn

you read that the way I've heard grandpa's read the Night Before Christmas. lol Of course, Santa wasn't a biker... I honestly don't enjoy this particular kind of poetry but I can tell you enjoyed creating your poem and reading it. And I know this will entertain many literotica readers. So, keep doing your thing!