All Comments on 'The Perfect Match.'

by Vaughan1

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Withholding a star.....

Boo... me again *hugs*, catching up in reverse order... which works out not so good for you. I read your Past Loves haiku first awarding it a 5 without thought. Beautiful, touching and technically perfect. Then I read the Perfect Match.... also very good but not as like the other, nor technically perfect either, so I can only give you 4 stars. Can't demean Past Lives by giving this one 5 stars. Keep writing, i'll keep reading.

MikeyDee76MikeyDee76over 5 years ago
Love it!

Brilliant!

Sir, I bow to your accomplished writing. Magnificent but hey, that's a foregone conclusion for any Welshman :)

A small gift from one of God's own to another :)

"With hearts on sleeve our magic weaves,

no mortal man asunder.

We lovers all from God's great land,

our words shall stir like Thunder"

BrandiWine1BrandiWine1over 4 years ago
Indeed

Brilliantly written and an amazingly perfect match.

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