All Comments on 'The Pit Dance'

Don't feel anything but the music.

It isn't until I see people staring that I even know I'm bleeding.

"No fear

No anger

No hurt"

Amen.

Great poem.

but the music and beat made up for it, though not always at the same time. I loved the line "cheating me out of absolution".

...is very interesting and likable, and there is a lot here to consider and marvel over. I find its structure a bit too rambling in spots, and think some reworking -- separation and paring -- might benefit it. Small point there....this was engrossing.

"...written in a driven pace and with a sharp language..."

pen, or finger, as it were ;) very enjoyable read, keep em coming ~~~ maria