All Comments on 'The Quest'

Wow! Now your WickedEve's Fav or the day, dude! You've come a hell of a long way in a short time. I'm sorry to say that I am underwelmed with most of this poem, but that is only because I am so overwelmed by the first line. That line should be rewritten as a Haiku. It stands alone. OK, nuff said.

Keep writing and practicing. You have good poetential!