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Click hereI see your whole in those two opals
that glitter in the dim half-light;
soft-burning like tallowed tapers
that consume themselves.
And watch as the diamonds roll down
over the curve of your cheek.
I trace my fingers over the line
of your submissive edges
and stroke the beads of sweat
that dot your skin, like fallen rain,
as my love nestles deep in the embrace
of your yielding folds.
I taste the blushing pilgrims
of your lips upon my own.
Mixed with that sweet scent;
the taste of your breath,
that is given fresh life
with every rippling thrust.
I smell the heat of you,
mixed with the cocktail of the room;
a slow-boil broth of our union,
blended with promise
and spiced
with the flow of love.
I hear the bellows of your breathing.
And listen to each moan, as passion
rushes up against the shore
to swell and break in sudden fury.
Until you sigh as softly
as the rain on the sea.
I love the opal metaphor. Eyes do glitter like that. And then you say diamonds that roll down your cheek. Two gems! I trace the line over your submissive edges. I can actually visualize that in my head. Describing lips as blushing pilgrims. Creative.
The imagery of love in this poem is extraordinary, and revealing. For the author and the reader. Singular beauty. I agree with Elorra Butler’s highlighting of the final two lines. An image to hear and see and feel with body and soul. Artistry. Thank you.
"Until you sigh as softly
as the rain on the sea."
So beautifully written. My heart feels touched having read this. Thank you for writing this and sharing it here! 5 stars.