All Comments on 'The Sense of You'

"Until you sigh as softly

as the rain on the sea."

So beautifully written. My heart feels touched having read this. Thank you for writing this and sharing it here! 5 stars.

Sensual and lovely!

The imagery of love in this poem is extraordinary, and revealing. For the author and the reader. Singular beauty. I agree with Elorra Butler’s highlighting of the final two lines. An image to hear and see and feel with body and soul. Artistry. Thank you.

I love the opal metaphor. Eyes do glitter like that. And then you say diamonds that roll down your cheek. Two gems! I trace the line over your submissive edges. I can actually visualize that in my head. Describing lips as blushing pilgrims. Creative.

Wow! This is utterly beautiful. Please write more!