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'n touch 'ur Cock

my Pussy begs

my World U rock .....!!!

this stanza actually stands out in simplicity , minimalism , compactness & would be a superb standalone Short Poem !!! 5-ed only for this stand-out Stanza which is like Leo Messi's 91-st minute goal liftin' his Team into next Round !!!!

Soooo - women are "visual" too? Years ago when my wife and I were reading I noticed her acting a little hot and botherd, I asked what she was reading - in her book a man would come and stand in front of a womans window and masterbate, it was described in detail. I'm not stupid - still turns her on to this day...