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TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
very nice

and i like the color assignment.

: )

YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
Memory bugs on the windshield of life

A nice read.

I only wonder about squashed "wishes".

The rest of the poem seems to be about memories, not wishes.

And are "stains" squashed, or just all that remains?

Would an opening like:

"Stains of memories squashed

are on the glass of the past."

Sound any better?

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