by Tzara
That about sums it up. Well said, beautifully said. I've been arguing with a friend for weeks who is trying to treat her current state of falling in love like a financial report with checks and balances. Splat.
brilliant. two slight hickups in the reading for me
'Is she political or, even, vote?'
how about 'is she political or, even, a voter?'
the second,
'and lovelorn spatter all about the impact point'
i wonder if 'splatter' should be plural...?
i love the impact of the beginning and love the 'voice' this poem carries. thanks for sharing.
Am I wrong if I laughed? Maybe cicadas think the same when they hit the windshiled during love bug season. I didn't see your poem this morning or I would've mentioned it in the new review poems. Good that today's reviewer caught it.