The Suitor

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Remec
Remec
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Unbidden, I come to you--an aching love
that seeks, from you, nothing more than making love.

With warm, whispered words I offer you myself,
anything to keep you from forsaking love.

I know how hard it can be to carry on;
it seems the world is bent on just taking love.

Just a smile brightens things considerably,
and our hearts simply cannot be faking love.

Let us not disturb you unwillingly,
or find we are mechanics of breaking love.

Remec
Remec
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damppantiesdamppantiesabout 17 years ago
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I love the form and you did a fine job with the poem. Very good.

Selena_KittSelena_Kittabout 17 years ago
I liked

I liked "mechanics of breaking love..."

impressiveimpressiveabout 17 years ago
It grew on me with each read

Nicely done, Remec. ~ Imp

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
I just want...

to make..love with you.

Unbridled_PassionUnbridled_Passionabout 17 years ago
Love is...

sometimes difficult if you can't find the trust

RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyabout 17 years ago
Love. . .

words beautifully written. :) Thanks for sharing the poem with us. ~ Red.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in today's New Poems Reviews.

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Such a well done ghazal ~ I do pick up and learn a few things, especially with something as distinctive as the ghazal. Even has a bit of a wistful air about it.