All Comments on 'The Summer Ocean'

meanings, couched metaphors or crazy euphemisms, just a nice little sexy read. I like it.

I thought you were going to expand on the different moods of the ocean, for me that first section didn't feel like it went with the rest of the piece, just my thoughts.

As my body undulates on the waves,

the motion feeds my excitement.

It is almost as if the sea itself is trying to make love to me.

I understand how myths could arise of

ocean gods seducing mortals.

this was my favourite part

Swimmin'!