All Comments on 'The Sun's Moon'

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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
nice write

I enjoyed your poetry

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Never look at the Moon the same again

Man, this poem is deeper than its surface shows. The fact that the world sees her darkside and that the sun warms her darkside every day? Wow! Awesome writing!

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