All Comments on 'The Third Glass'

yes yes the games we play

I liked this, and the formatting made me feel a little tipsy, but only half a glass :) I am a lightweight as

Liked the flow and format

good stuff!

Thanks.

~ J

if you're taking the road into her from behind - and she may need more like the bottle. lol I found the format to be an effective sobriety "walk the line" test and guess what? I failed. <laughin'> This was clever in both verse and lay out of wording. And I also wish to welcome you to the poem's side of the Literotica neighborhood!!! <smile>

Welcome wagon Vixxx

made me feel a bit drunk. LOL!

I like the unique format. ~Minx