All Comments on 'The Truth Inside'

a little of mating processes. TK U MLJ LV NV

I liked this very much. While I usually don't care for unusual line breaks via prepositions, conjunctions, etc., yours worked for me because the lines were abbreviated to begin with and a momentary pause before the next line begins did not sound forced or arbitrary like they do so often with longer lines, and I was also able to play with the image of the walnut throughout the length of poem without further distractions. Nicely crafted IMO.