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by Whisky7up
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Chagrinedover 19 years agoI like it. Forget the neanderthals.
The only change I could think of was to use the phrase:
Nothing but blackness, or Nothing
Blackness
and change it to
Nothing but blackness, or Blackest Nothing.
But hey, what do I know?
Liarover 19 years agoYou have been reviewed
This poem is mentioned in the New Poems thread on the forum.
sandspikeover 19 years agoI agree w/ Tath.
This work has PO but is lacking something. Quit sandbagging
and give us all your thoughts. Good start.
Tathagataover 19 years agoI like
the simplicity of this..although I'd like a little more " meat" on it.
It does convey a nice picture/ feeling of sadness and resignation.
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