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erectus123erectus123about 11 years ago
nicely written

observational conclusion works

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Male, unmarried, old enough to know what’s fun and young enough to do it. Interested in creative writing and role playing. Like most people i'm here to have some erotic fun. Many wild oats sown when I was younger but these days thinking about sex can be as much fun as doing it...

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