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by laurambell

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EroticOrogenyEroticOrogenyover 15 years ago
enjoyable & interesting

I enjoyed the way you progressed through the scene.

The impact of isolated words on a line was interesting and effective.

The last stanza has a nice little twist too.

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I've been writing erotica for years, but didn't start publishing them until 2009 and that's only because a friend encouraged me to do so. My stories are fantasy, with some reality twists to some of them. I enjoy writing AND reading erotica. I love reading incest stories;...