All Comments on 'This Is Real'

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tarablackwood22tarablackwood22about 20 years ago
A very pleasant read.

Some wonderful lines and phrasing. Thank you.

TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
Life never goes

the way we plan.

but you've turned your pain into a wonderful poem.

some great word choices and phrasing

remember..this too shall pass

Thank you

Be Well

YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
Singing my life. . .

An inspiration complains about success,

and yearns for success to:

". . . negate all of your denials

with just one letter, just one note

that isn't made for everyone else"

I wish the poem ended before the last two stanzas.

An interesting theme.

quietpolyquietpolyabout 20 years ago
amazing poem

You said it so well.

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