All Comments on 'Thunderstruck'

I like minimalist poetry, and this isn't bad, but I think it actually needs to be fleshed out a tad more. :) And what about the crumbs? I can't figure out what they're all about.

is rather nice, I liked the imagery here, esp in the first stanza but like WickedEve, am not too sure about 'catching crumbs'

I assume this is metaphorical and connects to the first stanza but can't be sure since it isn't made clear.

Still, a great read.

I like catching crumbs <grin... I enjoyed your poem (~_*)