All Comments on 'Tie Me Up'

by RhymeFairy

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
Power of the Arts

Love and the arts unchained,

where all become one overpowering;

and on reading pictures of passion,

submit to the artist's desires.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A wonderful pastiche

of strokes and images,such as:

Chain me to this wall of pleasure.

Cuff me with a featherous palm.

and:

I want to feel your breath of form,

imagine your flow on my body of write.

Nicely done,RF.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
I would rather

tie you up with a ribbon and a bow <grin> but I am all tied up at the moment <chuckleboned>

sophia janesophia janeover 18 years ago
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Well done! And I'm not just saying that because I'm a big fan of bondage. :)

Jennifer CJennifer Cover 18 years ago
You're a naughty girl, RF lol

I lurv your erotic poetry

and this one was a scorcher!

You go girl! lol

nicely done as always my friend.

~ Jenn

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