All Comments on 'Tied'

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sophia janesophia janealmost 19 years ago
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Excellent! I especially like the last few lines.

TathagataTathagataalmost 19 years ago
My only complaint

the use of the word " flesh" twice.

otherwise it flows wonderfully.

Thank you

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
tied

tongue tied~

speechless,

touching,

nice poem.

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
strong piece.....

and a great ending......it's been awhile......great work......don

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
lovely piece

well written sabina,

a lovely read,

thanks.

~ Jenn

bluerainsbluerainsalmost 19 years ago
sorry

I voted 100 but somehow it didn't take it...but I give it 5* ok...thanks dear...blue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Wow,,

sounds like those wolf winds need to blow against your quiet sleep...lovely pen....blue

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