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My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailalmost 20 years ago
Nice~

Thoughtfully spellbound...Time to ge...hehehe(~_*)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Welcome...

I haven't seen your work before but I like it. Keep writing and posting.

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Time

You might consider breaking this into at least two stanzas.

edit:

"hour glass " more commonly "hourglass"

"it's" =" its" (possessive has no apostrophe)

"it stride" = "its stride"

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Look out...

The grammar police are out... OOPS my mistake, it's only YDD!

Kindergarten get out early today YDD?

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