All Comments on 'Time Displacement'

I usually get bored when a poem goes on too long but yours held me to the end although it does need some editing i.e cutting out a lot of 'the's' and it would read more smoothly if you didn't start each line with a capital letter.

Anti-Porn?

Remind me never to go shopping, ever again.

OK here is the killer

The next generation is getting bored.

because before we reach

The next generation is getting bored.

most of us have left

shorten it

I gave you 100 anyway, but toss out the stuff you don't need