All Comments on 'To Be Insane'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Parenthetical statements just seem so out of place in poetry.

Just a quirk of mine, like developing worry lines

At the prolific use of ellipses;

Beyond that it seems

Insanity means never fitting in;

In which case, I suppose,

We are all a bit insane.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Insecurities!

Loneliness and insecurities - never to belong or fit in...is a form of insanity? Well Crafted!

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