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by SimonDoom

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Very good!

Not only could I visualize your act of "persuasion" but I could taste it. Keep up the good work.

oldsage_1oldsage_1about 5 years ago
First time

First time I have ever read a poem on this site!

yukonnightsyukonnightsabout 5 years ago
Clever

I enjoyed the story your poem told, as well as the clever 'end rhyme' scheme. I saw this come up on my CP the other day, Glad I finally got over here to read it.

chrissy2chrissy2about 4 years ago
poem

well written and got the rhythm of tongue and pussy

RawSilhouetteRawSilhouetteabout 3 years ago

This was delicious to read. Definitely inspiring.

MsNatalie99MsNatalie99almost 2 years ago

I love the pace, rhythm, and rhyme. Well done.

el_eyeel_eye5 months ago

Short, but so well written. Loved the pace and nastiness. Perfect.

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I am a long-time reader of stories on this Site, and I began publishing stories in late 2016. I enjoy a variety of erotic stories, and I hope to publish stories that explore many different aspects of erotica. Comments and constructive criticism are welcome.