All Comments on 'To the voyeur.'

what a way with words, exposed thought process from beginning to end

flawless, economical

if this would excite a voyeur or terrify him. After all, he just wants to watch, but here you are pulling him into the whole scene. Interesting.

Now, this one I enjoyed. Very good. And very unlike so many that read as if they had been quilled by a drunken Kung Fu master. Keep it up.

That Homer has a handle on erotic poetry...

woohoo...great poem HP~

three thumbs up two with nails~

Decide not, Eve. Voyeurs and an exhibitionists alike would be interested in HomerPindar's poem, which by the way, is good erotica that was delivered smooth—not too little and not too much.

as usual, I am spellbound!

in Sunday's reviews

....sexay! Wonderfully structured drawing the reader along - much like a voyuer.

Oh, forgot to add: You've obviously been "educated."

The most sexy thing about this poem is that I can't decide if the voyeur is a man or a woman. Just the way you are 'talking' to the lucky watcher would indicate it's a woman, but what if it's not? The possibilities behind that are beyond hot to me.

sexy, wow, nothing else to say, but can I watch too?:)