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by Zandrite

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29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowover 3 years ago

I sense the bitter-sweet tang of censorship here clad in eloquent lawyer-speak, and it rhymes too.

The sentence for poetry speech is five stars. I hope you honestly regret...nothing and do it again.

shadow_stormshadow_stormover 3 years ago

Brilliantly written, Zan.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wonderful use of language

I love the way you are trying to distance yourself from your feelings, from the situation and circumstances, through the use of impersonal language, and how the poem turns on itself in the end. That is amazingly creative. You are an inspiration.

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Hi, this is Zan. I write stories, poems... and occasionally things you might call a hybrid of the two. I love to hear opinions, so feel free to comment or contact if you have thoughts about what youā€™ve read. Iā€™m dreamy, idealistic, a little kinky... and prone to such brillia...