All Comments on 'Tocsin'

resonates so beautiful in this lovely pen..visuals are fine tuned....and pleasing to the senses....loved it*****o))bluerain

I enjoy good poetry. Thank you for bringing me some to read.

Thank you for a taste of something new, loved the metaphor-- imagining that tuning fork vibrating... geting the perfect harmonic

A very fine effort by a new voice,

"stirring the dead leaves of the heart"

is a very strong and fresh image.

My only question is "forefell".

I can't find it anywhere.