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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
a bit too shakespearean

but nice try,

also assorted errors or typos detract, i.e. "Its from may change"

"From pain shall ever touch they heart"

if I might suggest, post one or two poems well edited and proofed, 5 is a bit much especially with so many errors or oversights, no offense!

taugertaugeralmost 11 years agoAuthor
sorry

My spell check automatically changed them sorry

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Back again after a long hiatus, hoping to stay up to date. Feel free to email me with a kick up the behind if necessary. I am 6ft1 with ginger hair and blue/green eyes. There is nothing i love more than sitting down with a good book or working on my stories.