by Victoria_Lucas
slouching not to Nirvanna, but to the cabanna of the corner store, Kerouac says you have a rack, but I would hate to be a bore - have a half a banana, you can come back for more. I know I will towards your words. Best I've seen today!
The whole poem with the exception of the "whistling Dixie" reference, which is slightly bumpy. It's a common phrase to me when you have such new things to say throughout. Very good though, especially the first two strophes.
This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.<br>
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