All Comments on 'Train'

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
A TRAIN ROBBERY

about to happen, Or railriders and hobos, TK U MLJ LV NV

DawnJDawnJover 11 years ago
The sounds...

...that's what strikes me most in this poem. The sounds or their absence are pre-eminent here -- from the sound of the morning, through the rusty hinges to the bars on the doors. Not even the morning's "shrill" sounds can alleviate the weight of loss here.

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