All Comments on 'Translucent'

by alecxavieredmond

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Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
I like sexy alliteration

and the hue of her ass cheeks...and cursing sweetly...and slowly, reluctantly

Liked the whole damn thing Alec

alecxavieredmondalecxavieredmondover 10 years agoAuthor

As long as I have yours and Lesee's seal of approval then I know that I put out something good, my man. Til the next one.

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago
this part:

"I tongued a salacious soliloquy upon the slickening sheaths of skin concealing

that tiny, tender treasure of tremble-inducing sensation."

Excellent.

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