All Comments on 'Trap'

God I am crying again! Where is Ange with my tissues! Gina, I have lived your poem, you invite us to walk through a day, and so you are not alone. Well done.

was powerful...moving poem...thanks!

you know i dont like to comment :) but i had to, a poem that made my heart ache from a wonderful writer of poems. with love and intensity :) feigned....

a very powerful line from anna's poem and expanded on a woman with no reason to comb tangles from her hair.

Impressed with your imagery and how well you threaded the message you were sharing together in a simple but powerful way. I was also impressed by the structure you used: Long verse then short, giving the impression of a cage door slamming shut or being forced into and trapped within a small place with with ever verse.

This is my new favorite. Well done

Great choreography, great depictions of how the light is still dark, AS many people don't understand me when I get to feeling like this, just hopeless, I don't want no company, i just wanna rollover n' grieve 'til it passes! Great insight, Gina!! Keep it up!

Your friend

Ebby from OM

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.

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