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Cleardaynowabout 10 years agoGreat idea very well done
Beautiful and evocative.
The perilous forest which you cannot escape from is a lovely and rich construction.
It may just be the fact that this is somewhat unbelievable in England (unlike say Canada or the tropics) but I feel this poem needs just another element to bring it out fully.
Still a five & again, thanks for drawing me to Trapped 1.
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