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by JCSTREET

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tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Small...

....but brilliant!.....needing the light of the shells to write to -- what a concept!

flyguy69flyguy69almost 20 years ago
Beautifully balanced

on a single fulcrum: the desire for incoming

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
I read and commented earlier

but I must not have clicked on submit.

Anyway, this is wonderfully perfect poem.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
So compact

...yet saying so much between the lines (no pun intended)

I love this, JC!

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