All Comments on 'Trinkets of Remembrance'

Every phrase is wonderful, each stanza better than the last. I liked this a lot.

a few trinkets put away too.

great poem, great subject and very nicely written.

~Breath held for a moment

Recapture just past the last sigh

Coffee?s magic aroma closes the gap

Daylight slips in under the rug~

I Love that verse

Thank you

the kids are awake and the house is alive and the weather channel is on and where are my damn keys and....

Wonderful poem, Merry!

mostly at night. This is wonderful and real, the way we

hold on and awake to go again, lovely.