All Comments on 'Trouble'

to learn to write REAl poetry

I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. I obviously did not write this, or post this, for you. While I appreciate constructive criticism, subjective opinion is not very helpful to me. When I write, every now and then, a little rhyme escapes my pen. C'est la vie.

P.S. I LIKE Dr.Seuss. <3

...would have more power if written without typos.

And, DGS, you paint a lovely picture, but you sure take your time! :)