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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
So sweet

Again, a really sweet poem.

WBCO6250WBCO6250over 3 years ago

Nice rhythm and a very enjoyable read.

swiftlytiltingswiftlytiltingabout 3 years ago

Oh, what a wonderful poem!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

she calls me Paul also...

Woodthrush55108Woodthrush55108almost 3 years ago

I love this! Hot sex, humor, sweetness. Perfect.

Pablo3FlamesPablo3Flamesover 2 years ago

I love it, nice and hot. I love that you used "Love Muscle" that my signature word to use when describing the cock, amazing poem.

MarthaMcKinleyMarthaMcKinleyover 2 years ago

I really like your humanity, your honesty when you slip up or down right fuck up. And your sense of humor. Nothing like laughter after a good romp.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Not sure if it was meant to be humorous, but it suits it well near the end. It went from romantic to lustful to humorous, much like what can occur in real life with your significant other

dmallorddmallordalmost 2 years ago

This one also was very entertaining. Nancy must be a real special gal. Lucky you! I was fearful for a moment you'd be writhing in pain as she gave your 'seed' a rough little squeeze! Might want to get 'Nancy' embroidered on your pillowcases as a reminder, fellow. ;-) Along with sharing your letters of lust.

arisingsirenarisingsiren21 days ago

Romantic and seductive. Five stars.

ContinentalPsyOpContinentalPsyOp7 days ago

feels like a third part to the continuing saga in verse. it's an excellent entry in that excellent series. Nancy is quite the star of these tales and epics

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