All Comments on 'Truthful Spirit'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Nice concept

You start with rhyme and then stop then start again. Ok but some of the rest is real hard to get through. Like these lines...

"Words inspiring contemplation in heart's blight

Enticing fulfilling conversation in mind's flight

Risen expressions spoken in whisper's bright"

its a bit to much? No?

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