by Willow Rain
Yes, hot, sexy, and a lil tease. You shall pull him in my friend. Love your bait, hooked up a jig nice and right you have. Wonderfullll imagery, word play and flow. Will have to come back and read this one again. I love this kind of poem ~
More Please, for it is def. a keeper ~~!!!
I like this part the best:
"...the tiny fingertip touch of sandalwood oil that I have hidden
on the inside of my left ankle
for you to find."
Thank you.
a 'gemstone' of a poem!
So I slide my black ink pen
across the paper
lining up letters against
a crisp blue base line
in my composition notebook.
I have been willow'd (~_~)
good in this poem to just pick one favorite line or phrase. I have truly enjoyed reading your work and hope you continue to post here.
excellent poem, loved the sensory tickles and touches you have sprinkled onto the pages :)
nj