All Comments on 'Turnabout is Fair Play'

If you are serious about trying to write poetry I recommend you do some reading first. Get a feel for the tools and conventions of the craft. Try a website like versedaily.com or, here at Lit, try the Poetry Discussion forum and look at the "construction zone" or "passion suddenly" threads.

Don't give up-- you'll get better, I promise!

Fly

I felt the passion of your pen. as if I were a fly on the wall <grin nice write (~_~) hope to see more poetry from you!