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by f-cynyr

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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
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till you cascaded into my hands,

and i turned to stone.

as i did 3

tigerjentigerjenabout 13 years ago

Mmmmmmmmmmm enjoyed this very much.....well done ;)

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureabout 13 years ago
Question....

......"My vision made you kneel," how does that work? Did you mean a "look" made her kneel, or an "expression"? The rest is a bit flowery in a violent kind of way but I never did understand BDSM, your poem didn't help me.

Tess

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i have slowed my postings here at lite, for a number of reasons, but i still post regularly on my poetry blog. if you wish to read more of my poetry, please go to http://f-cynyr.blogspot.com/ and https://boundtome.blogspot.com/ thank you.