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Welcome to the Poetry side of Lit's house with this nice narrative poem of love and lust satisfied, again and again.

Welcome to the Poetry side of Lit's house with this nice narrative poem of love and lust satisfied, again and again.

Welcome to the Poetry side of Lit's house with this nice narrative poem of love and lust satisfied, again and again.

Welcome to the Poetry side of Lit's house with this nice narrative poem of love and lust satisfied, again and again.

And an ultimate fantasy this rendering is. Both individuals giving and receiving that most passionate of gifts.

It is better to give than to receive. This work reinforces that sentiment and it applies to friendship, love as well as lust. A vessel can only be filled after it has been emptied. Well done!